And continuing on with my Tenth Doctor era thoughts with The Doctor’s Daughter. I don’t care for this episode. The big thing is I just can’t accept the premise. You’re telling me this war was only a week long? There’s always officers not on the front lines directing everything that aren’t in active combat, and you’re telling me there’s not a single soldier who’s lived that long from being created by the machine who could remember that whole time? Why is General Cobb old? Did the machine just make him old for some reason? The time span given is just way too short for any of this to be believable. 7 months, maybe that could work. And honestly, I don’t think they do enough to explain why the humans and hath are fighting each other, or convincingly do an “over the years we don’t even know why we’re fighting” similar to the Kaled-Thal War. It’s just in an unsatisfying and underdeveloped middle ground.
I don’t like how quickly and strongly Ten is to just directly reject Jenny for most of this. While to an extent I agree with his assessment that she isn’t really his daughter beyond genetics, she still deserved more respect from him in the way he treated her. Also, he’s the last of the Time Lords, always so affected by that, so you’d think he’d be jumping for joy at the prospect of even if not culturally a Time Lord, a new biological Gallifreyan at the very least. And a big part of it is him rejecting her because she’s a soldier, just like 12 will do with Journey Blue or Danny Pink, it’s stupid here too, but arguably worse to do to someone being framed by the story as your own daughter. And fine, maybe the Doctor lost all his family in the Time War, but it’s not like he kept in touch with them even before then, he didn’t seem to give the slightest thought to his children and grandchildren since The Dalek Invasion of Earth so the idea that Jenny is just something he couldn’t go through again because of the loss of his “real” family just doesn’t ring true to me.
Also about the Doctor. “The man who never would” who has in fact killed so many in his many lifetimes, both directly and indirectly and compounded with some of the stuff we’ve seen this Doctor himself do and will see this Doctor do is just a laughably stupid moment in this episode. I understand the principle of don’t be a society built on someone killing another, but when he’s a man who absolutely “would” and has, it’s just eye-roll inducing.
What was the point of having Martha join them in this one if they were just going to separate her from the Doctor and Donna and not have her do all that much? The map scene was the Doctor activating the map, Martha just happened to be there. She did help the one Hath with his dislocated shoulder, but her whole thing with walking through the wasteland to find the Doctor was just that, there was little other point to it, her side story line is just superfluous and the episode would have been no better or worse without it. Her losing her Hath friend is a bit sad, but I didn’t feel enough of the attachment needed to really care, and I’m not sure if Agyeman really sold it either. The Hath are a neat looking alien I guess.
Jenny herself is all right I guess, but I don’t know how much of that is I find her an interestingly written character or just attractive. Moffett’s performance is fine, I don’t want to imply that she has nothing going for her but looks, since that’s simply untrue, but I don’t think the material is all that interesting for her. Soldier learning that she doesn’t actually have to kill isn’t that shocking of a revelation like the episode wants you to think it is. I definitely don’t see why so many were clamoring for a Jenny spinoff after this, other than simply the fact that this episode sort of creates a loose end that they may want resolved. It’s even a bit unclear if she can regenerate or if it’s just the Source restoring her (I lean toward the latter, since the effect was more consistent with the Source than regeneration). It feels like her existence was for the next time trailer moment of “what, the Doctor has a daughter now?” with very little additional thought to the character. Also, it’s kinda hilarious that the machine goes to the effort of giving her make-up when it spits her out.
Donna of course has the rather cool moment of figuring out that everything was the dates, the war only having been going on for seven. But I’d be lying if I said I didn’t at this point want Donna to figure something out for a reason other than “because she’s a secretary.” I think they’ve done it enough times at this point and I’d like to see other sides of her intelligence than just what her career has trained her in. The scene where they basically just said that Donna wasn’t pretty enough to distract or seduce a guard felt a little mean too. And as much as I think the Doctor’s immediate rejection and other ways he treated Jenny was harsh, especially in some of the things he directly said to her, I’m not sure I liked the way Donna just kept pushing him about it. It’s not like the Doctor chose for Jenny to be created, or chose an action that led to her creation, he was forced into the machine. And it wasn’t a case of something like an accidental pregnancy, where the father should have to take responsibility given he made the choice to engage in activity where that is obviously a risk. However, as indicated before, I’m fine with Donna at least trying to make the Doctor treat Jenny with respect, but I don’t think it’s fair for her to expect him to just immediately take her in as his daughter either given the circumstances. The people on Messaline who created Jenny are the ones that should have to take responsibility for her.
Not sure if I believe that they’d suddenly stop fighting each other just because the Doctor threw a ball of gas on the ground and didn’t kill a guy. Ending felt a little rushed. And apparently a little ball of gas can somehow terraform a whole planet. It really is just there as a MacGuffin, and significantly adds to how contrived the entire premise of this story is. I looked at my 3/10 I have for this and thought about whether or not that’s fair, but I really couldn’t come up with any good reason to give it any more than that, so it’s gonna stay there. Easily the weakest from Series 4.