Never cruel or cowardly! Let’s not run away and hide, even if this is a creepy room!
It’s probably just a woman called Eve waiting for us to join her, and then dump her!
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I think hiding is the creepier and more atmospheric option. 
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We’ve faced everything else head on, we might as well do thia one too
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This is also Twelve we’re talking about.
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If Jiao comes back I will be so happy!
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I’ve worked out what bothers me about these.
They’re written in present tense. It makes for some awkward prose and makes it sound like a story synopsis which makes it hard, for me, to get into the story.
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Some errors were made here. Nothing to see!
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It really feelt like it was going to end after all those pages
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I think you made a mistake here @Tian. It did end for me (in that weird “I wish I could do it all again”, loop ending)! The stuff happening with Eva isn’t right. You should go to entry 56 from 107.
If you read 108, the Doctor is in the TARDIS with the malignocite and in the next one he is suddenly with an Eva. He should be somewhere else dropping off the malignocite.
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That’s a lot chapters in a row. Gald we still have a choice waiting at the end. Shame that it is a godchild one…
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Wait what???
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Well, not a lot for me to choose, it says THE END 
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My e-book copy says go to 46 in 107
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Sorry, I meant 108. That takes you to 56, which is the end.
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You are right. I accidentally backed a page and did not click the link.
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Terror Moon - Page 79
Last choice: you think he should wait and see who it is
The Doctor confronts Professor Hardacre, a former scientist who abandoned a secret bioweapons project. He reveals the project’s disastrous consequences while the Doctor seeks to understand its broader implications.
Terror Moon - Page 109
Professor Hardacre explains the disastrous result of his nanotech experiments, which led to the creation of deadly, telepathic malignocites. The Doctor confronts the leader, hoping to stop the deadly swarm.
Terror Moon - Page 108
The Doctor faces off with the malignocite leader, a result of a failed biogenetic experiment. As the creature follows him to the TARDIS, the Doctor outsmarts it, escaping just as its telepathic control fades.
Terror Moon - Page 56
The Doctor traps the malignocite in a stasis point, a timeless void, where it can no longer control minds. As he leaves the creature behind, he reflects on his actions, wishing for a chance to start over.
THE END
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Thank you Tian!! That was so much fun.
My thoughts are here: Review of Terror Moon by 15thDoctor · TARDIS Guide
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That was a great review that captured my feelings of the book.
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