I got the animated DVD for this quite soon after it released (someone was selling it on Tradera, a Swedish online marketplace, and I swooped in ASAP).
This was a really good story, even if I’m crossing quite a gap here since this is my last Hartnell for now and the one that comes before in my collection is The Time Meddler. So I am not too familiar with Steven (only seen him partially in The Chase, Morton Dill can do one BTW, and The Time Meddler) and this is my only Dodo story. But anyway, onto the story. It is quite a clear commentary on colonialism, racism and slavery, no subtlety there but it’s done mostly well. Really the main characters of this story are Steven and Dodo (I’m guessing Hartnell was too ill since I think he only has three more stories after this one) and I think they work well. I especially liked Dodo actually, she was smart, quite cunning, caring and could mostly hold her own. When she smashes the lab at the end and enthusiastically answers “YES!” to One when he says it’s fun to destroy evil… that kinda gave me Ace vibes.
I liked the characters in general here and while this is not subtle at all about the message, the message is obviously a good one and the story comes with complexities that I do find to be realistic. The “savages” aren’t a monolith, they felt like real people and there was real inter-tribal conflict. Tor wants pure revenge against the Elders and the city people, for good reasons even if that makes him somewhat blinded by rage. There’s that one older man who reveals where Chal, Dodo and Steven went in order to save himself. It’s not the best decision obviously, but something that has happened in real life many times. Chal is more trusting of the TARDIS team, but even he questions them at points and doesn’t follow blindly.
Additionally, you have Avon and Flower, who I wish we got to see a little more of. Their brief scenes are important though, as we see the perspective of the everyday citizens and especially the younger people of the city. Everything is clean and neat and they seem like cheerful and nice people, but there’s clear ignorance and racism beneath, with Avon saying “we’re all equal in here” and that “this is a free state”. That scene also shows that this is an authoritarian regime, with Flower worrying over the potential punishments they may receive for the negligence. We never find out what, which is intriguing and a little scary even. We don’t get that much of the Doctor in this one, as said, but what we do get is fantastic. He’s really in the mischievous grandfather role here and really clever. His conscience and intelligence affecting Jano is an interesting part of the story, very much in-character for One’s cleverness, it lends itself to a peaceful “for the most part” conclusion, and it’s almost like the DoctorDonna done 4 decades earlier.
I do have some negatives, mainly the worldbuilding. Some of it is great, but we lack some things that are actually rather basic. We have no real name for “the savages”, what their people or tribe is called, neither any kind of nationality or anything for the people of the city. Not even the planet gets named. Then there is the fact that while we see quite a bit of the city society, we don’t get as much of the culture of the tribe. There’s the scene in the cave with the painting but not much more. I wish we saw more and learned more of the history of this conflict between the two groups.
Then there are a few other gripes. As much as the tribespeople are written well and feel like different, real people and not just as one group who all think the same, they are sometimes a bit too defeatist. That’s a trait seen in basically all of the tribal characters, even Tor. Now yes, they’re in a very bad situation with little hope, and I as a white guy shouldn’t speak for oppressed people, but I still believe that there would be those willing to fight. This ties into another slight trope that I dislike, with the subduing of Exorse making some of the tribespeople, including Tor for some reason, bow down to the TARDIS team and worship them like gods. This is a really uncomfortable “white saviour” trope and feels out of place for this story. Not to mention it doesn’t go anywhere.
The Elders, Jano aside, are also basically totally irrelevant which I think is a shame. If we got some more of them, or if you make Edal be one of them and also the commander of the guards, then his brief takeover as leader make a bit more sense. I feel like the other Elders would rule or elect one out of their group. As such, it’s good that doesn’t happen here since the Elders have no personality whatsoever, but it could have been tweaked a little.
To conclude I’ll touch on a few points. First, the animation. I watched the B&W variation and thought it was pretty good, probably on the level of The Invasion’s animation. Sometimes things looked a little weird, like for example Steven’s movement when calling for Dodo in Episode 2 and then all the guards following Jano in the little “siege”, it looks a bit cheap and off. Secondly, Steven’s exit. I’ve not seen enough of him to form much of an opinion, but it was a pretty amicable and touching scene, I got a little sad myself. Thirdly, this kind of ties into the first point but whatever, it’s also good to have this animated variant because Jano appears in blackface in the original and you know… we don’t want that.
Overall, a really good story that has a few irritating flaws but definitely still fun to watch. 8/10.