Fresh Beginnings

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14316565/1/Fresh-Beginnings
It’s about Bonnie, the Zygon from series 9, meeting the 12th Doctor again after having enough with the Zygons who’ve been constantly taunting her ever since the invasion. He offers her a chance to be a companion. This is the beginning of a (long) series I’m working on.

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I’ve bookmarked it for later. I do love some Bonnie.

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An intriguing idea having Bonnie as a companion.

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Read it and I have to say very lovely! I enjoy the dialogue and I like how it starts with Bonnie being surrounded by the other Zygons, very lovely of a Touch. I think you did Twelve very well, and I do love the nod to Doctor Disco (wasn’t that a name that debuted in the Zygon Parter? I think so, at least). I don’t have much to say, besides the line about Bonnie being the first alien to travel with him feels a bit wrong, unless of course you mean just this Incarnation, which might be true then, but that’s a nitpick and the Pedantic speaking in me.

Either way, very nice Job, make sure to share more if you have any further Stories written with those two! Great work, keep it up!

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Thanks! At the time of writing the story I didn’t know that the Doctor had previous alien companions since I wasn’t aware of classic who but it could apply to this incarnation. Yeah, Doctor Disco was mentioned in the Zygon 2 parter. This is part 1 of a series with her and the Doctor but it’ll take me a while to release the next one.

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Ah, very fair! Sorry, the pedantic was speaking in me there :sweat:

And no worries, take your Time with it! Excited to read any future Installments of it!

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