And I don’t just mean Ace’s bizarre ‘seduction’ scene where she suddenly acts cray-cray for several pages and this is supposed to be sexy?
I heard that she was supposed to want to swim in the ocean with him, but the weather that day made a mess of that. Surprised that he changed the scene to match.
But how is her running around randomly and monologueing nonsense supposed to be seductive?
Shouldn’t she at least be talking to the dude? Flattering him or something?
The entire scene is bizarre and lacks any internal logic.
This is now the third review I’ve written for this story because its just that rage inducing.
If you can, I recommend reading all three reviews to see how my thoughts unfold over time as the current political landscape keeps changing.