One Sentence at a Time - Storytelling Discussion

this time edit your deleted post into the next line or two to “erase” it

1 Like

You’re right, thanks.

I’m not sure why I keep clicking on the wrong thread to comment on the story :sob:

2 Likes

Not sure where the writer is going with this. I think he’s losing his mind.

3 Likes

hey i’m trying my best

2 Likes

Or she. Or its. Or they. Or zir. Non-binary people can lose their mind too.[1]

Sorry @Mercury, didn’t know you’re the writer. Where’d you last see your mind?


  1. Not done studies on this, just hearsay. ↩︎

2 Likes

I was hinting that Nic Briggs is writing this himself :sweat_smile:

2 Likes

I was going to as well but then saw the follow-up and tried to be funny. Sorry, Mercury.

2 Likes

Who said “Art is dead”, when we live in a world where this sentence just got formed:

Art :ok_hand:

:rofl:

4 Likes

Hemingway often spoke about how you have to strip away at your work, cutting unnecessary words…

I wonder how he’d feel that I just made Briggs leave, then immediately return :sob: so unnecessary

He paused, let out a “for Briggs sake” and moonwalked back. He had to know for sure…

2 Likes

I don’t know about you, but I’m finding this story absolutely gripping.

1 Like

I think it excels in it’s absurdity and in fact we’re actually making a salient point about the state of copyright

3 Likes

That’s the kind of multi textual storytelling I was hoping for.

Proper clever dicks aren’t we?

2 Likes

I’ve added a quick summary of chapter one before my post.

Hopefully this will help people jump in, without needing to read everything (though why wouldn’t you, Briggs is cooking! This is gold :rofl:

1 Like

Proper clever tricklers

3 Likes

No, I’ve cut out the asparagus and I’m fine now.

1 Like

I’ll have you know that the word ‘Trickler™’, in all its forms, is copyrighted, and every time you use it, you owe me!

3 Likes

I feel like I’ve said it before, but this new exercise has reminded me: I fully intend (at some point in the future, when I can muster the required strength and time) to write an essay on that! Doctor Who is a franchise that embodies the concept of the Death of the Author so comprehensively and on such a vast scale that, combined with its nature as a pan-generational institution, boasting contributions from creatives who themselves were and are still fans, it blurs the lines between writer and reader, creator and observer; Doctor Who is the perfect case study for the democratisation of narrative, a text that retains its identity despite changing so drastically with such frequency—it’s the Spaceship of Theseus! :laughing:

4 Likes

What about if I actually trickle…do I still owe you then?

I’m not saying I do trickle by the way. The floodgates stand firm these days.

2 Likes

You wouldn’t sue your own Tricklers! You couldn’t! :sweat_droplets:

3 Likes

THE TRICKLERS BRIGGADE: So Nic, we’ve written you a role. We’d love you to play it.

BRIGGS: I get to be the Doctor, right?

THE TRICKLERS BRIGGADE: …

BRIGGS: I get to be the Doctor…. Right?

THE TRICKLERS BRIGGADE: You voice a lil robot dog that we forgot about and was never mentioned again.

3 Likes